Nowadays, people like to take a trip to where they want to go. There are two ways about trip one is backpacking travel and the other is tour travel trip. People who like backpacking can stay at the spot longer which they like, they can rest longer if they want and they can go anytime if they want. They can add some trip and delete the trip whenever they want. It’s free than tour travel trip. If you go abroad it’s better that you choose the tour travel trip. The interpreter will go with the travel agency so you don’t worry about the language. But it’s not as free as backpacking travel because you must stay with the travel agency. But you can meet many people from the other country in the team. If you travel at our country there is no language problem and you can gain many information from the Internet so you can choose backpacking travel. But if you want to go abroad there may have some language problem so you can choose the tour travel trip.
It is good that you listed quite a few differences between these two kinds of traveling. Some statements are nicely argued. For example,backpackers can stay longer at a particular spot than those who join a tour travel trip. I also agreed with you when you said backpacking traveling results in a more flexable traveling schedule for travelers than tour travel trips do.
回覆刪除While I was reading, however, I found some sentences and clauses that you may like to fix. For example, it is better that you try to break down this long sentence into two: "There are two ways about trip one is backpacking travel and the other is tour travel trip." (lines 1 and 2)
Additionally, 'the spot which they like longer' sounds more accurate than 'the spot longer which they like'. (line 2)
Also, could you tell what's wrong with this sentence: 'It's free than tour travel trip' (line 3)
Finally, you need some commas, at lease two, to help this sentence - "If you travel at our country there is no language problem and you can gain many information from the Internet so you can choose backpacking travel'. Do you know where to place the commas?